Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

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Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

Postby conradoaccorsi » Feb 26th, 2013, 6:08 pm

This event is placed 5 months after Arkham City,this is supposed to be A3,I'm still thinking on a better title, I started this story in 2012, so neither Arkham Knight and Origins are included in my canon

Arkham Asylum can be seen,reformed the same way it was before Ivy attack.

WB Games

The screen starts travelling into Arkham Mansion interior leading up to a secret cell in the Warden's Office.

Rocksteady Studios

The screen stops in front of the door

BATMAN: ASHES OF GOTHAM

Black Screen.
Batman wakes up. His costume is incomplete without gauntlets and boots,without the kevlar only the mask and the grey costume. With a blurry vision he can see a cell,he tries to move but is immobilized by chains in the neck and feet and by a strait jacket. The cell dirty as hell,the walls are scratched,blood in the floor, water dripping from pipes, that is Amadeus Arkham underground cell, the door opens,Nightwing and Robin enters the cell.
Nightwing: Sorry Bruce but this for your own good.
Batman: WHAT? MY OWN GOOD?
Robin: He's right Bruce, after everything that happened, you felt paranoid,started to hallucinate with Joker, Talia, Jason, you were saying that all your life was manipulated by secret organizations, that an order of death angels were hunting you. You broke your only rule, you've lost morals, you went to hell and couldn't go back.
Batman struggles against the chains only to feel more tired and agonized.
Batman: RELEASE ME NOW! GOTHAM NEEDS PROTECTION!
Nightwing: Sorry,we can't do this,try to meditate because we are leaving, as you said Gotham needs Protection.
Batman: NO DON'T LEAVE ME HERE, PLEASE! Please... PLEASE!
Instantly Batman tries to struggle the chains again without success.
Batman: YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME HERE!
Start screaming...laughing...crying...he was starting to get insane.
CONTINUE...
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Re: Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

Postby VoodooMu » Feb 27th, 2013, 9:36 pm

Good start. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes and what will happen. In my opinion his sounds more like a Prolouge than a Part 1 but nevertheless. Good Job! I'm just confused on Batman's last line. Does he say 'start scream... Laughing... Crying or is that what he does? Anyway very good job and I'm looking forward to reading the next parts as they come.
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Re: Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

Postby conradoaccorsi » Feb 27th, 2013, 11:38 pm

baconfat23 wrote:Good start. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes and what will happen. In my opinion his sounds more like a Prolouge than a Part 1 but nevertheless. Good Job! I'm just confused on Batman's last line. Does he say 'start scream... Laughing... Crying or is that what he does? Anyway very good job and I'm looking forward to reading the next parts as they come.

I already changed the last line I forgot to write it.
The prologue will come soon maybe after part 5 so you can understand what happened.
It will be out as a Flashback chapter.
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Re: Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

Postby Batwoman » Jun 3rd, 2013, 9:50 pm

Hello. These " Ashes of Arkham" stories are very good.
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Re: Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

Postby conradoaccorsi » Jun 4th, 2013, 6:15 pm

RedRobin1999 wrote:Hello. These " Ashes of Arkham" stories are very good.

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Re: Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

Postby Maultest » Jun 4th, 2013, 8:19 pm

Ooo I like it, I think it might be a good idea to go back though and explain what finally pushed him into having Nightwing and Robin to lock him, Maybe as a flashback ? Looking forward to more reads.
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Re: Batman: Ashes of Gotham [Part 1]: Locked Up

Postby conradoaccorsi » Jun 4th, 2013, 11:55 pm

Maultest wrote:Ooo I like it, I think it might be a good idea to go back though and explain what finally pushed him into having Nightwing and Robin to lock him, Maybe as a flashback ? Looking forward to more reads.

Great Idea I was planning to do it a little longer but the 6 chapter was a disaster.
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